I've always loved the look and feel of journal style books, so I'm really looking forward to seeing where this all goes. You know, not too long ago I was wondering how one would go about collecting solar energy from the different types of stars there are, mainly with how exactly one would differ from another. I also really like the idea of Cybertron either revolving around a blue dwarf or binary stars. It'd certainly be interesting to see how the photocats would react to pulsar stars.
The only thing I could really think of to improve this is to add in the little details, like adding in the different elements for whatever Rotary used as an image capture. Kind of like how the pictures look when taken with whatever image capture equipment they have, whether it be external or their own optics. Kind of like the stuff seen in the Movie verse when looking through Frenzy's eyes. Maybe even their version of a coffee mug stain on paper, which would be, uh, I dunno, an energon cube stain on a datapad screen? Or even a datapad with all of the little buttons and such on it, being held by Rotary or another scientist. Just some suggestions.
*notices sites in link section**is in glee with the list of sensors* I...am going to get absolutely nothing done today now.
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on 2009-07-27 06:37 pm (UTC)The only thing I could really think of to improve this is to add in the little details, like adding in the different elements for whatever Rotary used as an image capture. Kind of like how the pictures look when taken with whatever image capture equipment they have, whether it be external or their own optics. Kind of like the stuff seen in the Movie verse when looking through Frenzy's eyes. Maybe even their version of a coffee mug stain on paper, which would be, uh, I dunno, an energon cube stain on a datapad screen? Or even a datapad with all of the little buttons and such on it, being held by Rotary or another scientist. Just some suggestions.
*notices sites in link section**is in glee with the list of sensors* I...am going to get absolutely nothing done today now.